LAYOUT 1; How long would it take and shoot a picture? You must have spent more time diddling with the pictures on the internet. In fact this might have been a good learning experience – how you chop things changes the look of the image. You have chopped off heads and the type does not match the image – yet it is clear and legible. LAYOUT 2; This is the best of the 3 advertisements. When you do the photograph yourself then you have the flexibility of mapping the images in the frame for your own solution, not having the image dictate the look. It is actually quicker to take the photograph than not. There is an odd pivotal point where the red path and the shield sort of meet. Slogan text not so good. LAYOUT 3: So this could have worked even better if grand ma had a BBQ. Many you are an excellent student. I understand work takes preference. I would like to see you in another class IDEA / research: a great idea and lots of grass – grass says clean and family!!!. You have great ideas but the translation is your hardest deal. You have a great eye for photography. Good luck you are a delight to have in the class
LAYOUT 1; How long would it take and shoot a picture? You must have spent more time diddling with the pictures on the internet. In fact this might have been a good learning experience – how you chop things changes the look of the image. You have chopped off heads and the type does not match the image – yet it is clear and legible.
ReplyDeleteLAYOUT 2; This is the best of the 3 advertisements. When you do the photograph yourself then you have the flexibility of mapping the images in the frame for your own solution, not having the image dictate the look. It is actually quicker to take the photograph than not. There is an odd pivotal point where the red path and the shield sort of meet. Slogan text not so good.
LAYOUT 3: So this could have worked even better if grand ma had a BBQ. Many you are an excellent student. I understand work takes preference. I would like to see you in another class
IDEA / research: a great idea and lots of grass – grass says clean and family!!!. You have great ideas but the translation is your hardest deal. You have a great eye for photography. Good luck you are a delight to have in the class