Excellent roughs mandy DESIGNER Sheppard fairey GRID: modular TARGET AUDIENCE: tourist CONCEPT: It’s a freak show, entertaining, fun for kids and scary – not censored for the kids. SLOGAN: What the freak? Freaky Friday is everyday Wonderous Aborations Miscreants 3/28 – use of the stripes and the comic book idea is in line with the notion of the Venice Beach freakshow. Perhaps integrate the image of the sofa as an entire image. What is your hierarchy? What is the most important information Examples of photos What type of technique are you going to use on the poster. Roughs the right size. Tyoeface. Where is your paragraph a paragraph.
Design: Your use of the lines to direct you through the image is terrific. Integrating the line with the picture that directs you out through the picture adds interest and movement. Center through the right then down. You used his style as a reference point and started making it your own. What is your hierarchy. What the freak needs to be bigger because the Venice beach heading. It is the most important so make it bigger. The white pushes it forward. Elements of 2D: The hot color is very saturated and could have been emphasized with the use of a cool color. To pull out the color in the background on the floor in to the text, and that will allow it to become a texture. Also add a bit of blue to the brown color. Check to see if you need to add some of the blue brown into the ½ circle at the bottom. Great picture. Make sure the star border runs into the lines at the top. Try putting the “venice beach freak show” in the very bottom of the page. What is more important the freak show
Excellent roughs mandy
ReplyDeleteDESIGNER Sheppard fairey
GRID: modular
TARGET AUDIENCE: tourist
CONCEPT: It’s a freak show, entertaining, fun for kids and scary – not censored for the kids.
SLOGAN: What the freak?
Freaky Friday is everyday
Wonderous
Aborations
Miscreants
3/28 – use of the stripes and the comic book idea is in line with the notion of the Venice Beach freakshow.
Perhaps integrate the image of the sofa as an entire image.
What is your hierarchy? What is the most important information
Examples of photos
What type of technique are you going to use on the poster.
Roughs the right size.
Tyoeface.
Where is your paragraph a paragraph.
angela
Design: Your use of the lines to direct you through the image is terrific. Integrating the line with the picture that directs you out through the picture adds interest and movement. Center through the right then down. You used his style as a reference point and started making it your own.
ReplyDeleteWhat is your hierarchy. What the freak needs to be bigger because the Venice beach heading. It is the most important so make it bigger. The white pushes it forward.
Elements of 2D: The hot color is very saturated and could have been emphasized with the use of a cool color. To pull out the color in the background on the floor in to the text, and that will allow it to become a texture. Also add a bit of blue to the brown color. Check to see if you need to add some of the blue brown into the ½ circle at the bottom. Great picture.
Make sure the star border runs into the lines at the top.
Try putting the “venice beach freak show” in the very bottom of the page. What is more important the freak show
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